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Small talk:

The three dragons walk together to the village.
Spyro walked behind Cynder and Hope, he listening to there chit chat.
They talked for several minutes before Spyro asked.

“Hey Hope what kind of elements do you have?”
Hope looked on Spyro like she finally gets the chance to talk to him.
“I have a special element because it is two elements mixed together.” answered Hope.
“Is that possible?” asked Cynder surprised.
“I thought that only the purple dragon should be able to have more than one element.”
“No, I know many other dragons with two mixed elements.” answered Hope.
“What two elements do you have?” Spyro asked again.
“I have fire and darkness as my elements, so that does me to a Darkfire dragon.” answered Hope.

“A Darkfire dragon, unbelievable.” said Spyro there had been very interested in Hope.
Cynder noticed that Spyro talked a lot with Hope, which was very annoyed of it and tried to change the topic.
“How big is the village?” Cynder asked desperately.
“It is not that big.” answered Hope.
“But that is many dragons in the village.” said Hope and looked at Cynder.
“We can maybe find a handsome dragon to you.”

Cynder looked directly at Hope like she has bend offended.
Hope smiled at Cynder and said:
“it was just a joke.” laughed Hope.
But Cynder don’t see the funny in that, Spyro smiled and looked at Cynder.
“Can’t you take a joke?” said Hope.
“No I can’t!” said Cynder offended and run.
Spyro run after Cynder “com on Cynder it was just a joke.” said Spyro.
“Sorry.” said Hope behind them.
“it was not my purpose to get you mad.”
“Are you okay Cyn?” said Spyro.
Cynder looked wired at Spyro `he has never called me “Cyn” before.´ she thought.
“Uhm… I’m fine, I only overreacted sorry.” answered Cynder.
“It’s okay.” said Spyro.

“Should we continue.” said Hope like she was busy.
“Why so busy?” asked Cynder.
“So we can get to the village before darkness falls.” answered Hope.
The three dragons continued they small talk.
My second chapter of my fanficton inspired by :iconshade105:
I have got Cynders nikname from Shade105
but I have not asked him
so I'll say sorry. ^^;

I own Hope the Darkfire Dragon.
You may use her but ask me frist

Spyro and Cynder belongs to Sierra!

If I have made some mistakes
so sayed it to me so I can fix it.

Plesed comment. :D

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First CH: [link]
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:iconpp2012555:
PP2012555 Featured By Owner May 24, 2012
Cyn!!!!!
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:iconjhon117masterchieff:
jhon117masterchieff Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011   General Artist
hers the toons [link]
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jhon117masterchieff Featured By Owner Feb 19, 2011   General Artist
music to listen to good fore reading these awsume storytho
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Gamelady12 Featured By Owner Oct 17, 2010
Heheh I knew this would happen xD
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B-weazy Featured By Owner Jan 4, 2010
good chap, but you said at the end " the three dragons continued they small talk"
:Sweating a little...:
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:icondragonofdarkness1992:
DragonofDarkness1992 Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
xD
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:iconb-weazy:
B-weazy Featured By Owner Jan 5, 2010
i think you meant their small talk :|
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8Kiba9 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2009
hehe^^ I like it when Spyro calls her "Cyn"^^ thats too cute^^
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:icondragonofdarkness1992:
DragonofDarkness1992 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks... I got it from :iconshade105:'s fic there was the first fic I read :D
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8Kiba9 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2009
i first saw it in a story a friend of me wrote^^ but unfortunatly he had to delete it from dA.... oh well^^ its still just too cute^^ and it sounds nice^^
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:icondragonofdarkness1992:
DragonofDarkness1992 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Well try to find it on Spyro froums...
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:icon8kiba9:
8Kiba9 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2009
if already found it^^ he showed me^^ lol^^
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:icondragonofdarkness1992:
DragonofDarkness1992 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Oh okay xD
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:icon8kiba9:
8Kiba9 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2009
yup^^ too bad that he stopped writing it... but hey he said he wants to continue it again^^
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:icondragonofdarkness1992:
DragonofDarkness1992 Featured By Owner Sep 29, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
I hope he will... it ended with a cliffhanger ._."
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Fantasyfan101 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2009
nice ^^
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:icondragonofdarkness1992:
DragonofDarkness1992 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks this is the first story I have ever writen. :)
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:iconfantasyfan101:
Fantasyfan101 Featured By Owner Jan 17, 2009
Still nice ^^
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:icondragonofdarkness1992:
DragonofDarkness1992 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2009  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks again. :D
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:iconfantasyfan101:
Fantasyfan101 Featured By Owner Jan 18, 2009
Your welcome ^^
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:icongenobee8492:
Genobee8492 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
LOOOL!I FACED PALMED AT WHAT HOPE SAID!
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:icondragonofdarkness1992:
DragonofDarkness1992 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the comment. :D
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:icongenobee8492:
Genobee8492 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008
:rofl:
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:icondragonofdarkness1992:
DragonofDarkness1992 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
What...?
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:icongenobee8492:
Genobee8492 Featured By Owner Dec 17, 2008
this story is EPIKLY funny :rofl: :rofl: :rofl: :rofl:
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:icondragonofdarkness1992:
DragonofDarkness1992 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks. :D
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:icongenobee8492:
Genobee8492 Featured By Owner Dec 18, 2008
no, no TY!
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UNOWNBX Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
streek: hehhehheh...
what are you laughing at streek?
streek: im gonna tape this whole thing! ^^
why?
streek: hey some1s gotta do it.... who better then a dragon that can trun invisable! and nto get in the way!
ok whatever..... NOW GET OFF MY COMP!!!
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DragonofDarkness1992 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Lol
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UNOWNBX Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2008
lol i know...

streek: fine... *gets off* *something falls on him* what the!? random!? what where you doing on the ceiling?!
random: i was break danceing on the ceiling fan....then some1 turned it on...
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:iconxsdstitch:
XSDSTITCH Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
Nice Chapter!

I only found this mistake: In your author's comments in the line "You may use her but ask my frist" you should say "ask me first" but I don't blame you!

Fugeo: I think this mistake is not bad! And when I see it right I get a second sister with a familiar element! My only question is: Is she older or younger then me?

Me: I don't know and not plan to use her in my story so I don't care if she your older or younger sister... more interested is she Cynders younger or older sister...
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:icondragonofdarkness1992:
DragonofDarkness1992 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the comment. :D

And thanks for mistake finding.

And Hope is almost ad the age of Spyro and Cynder
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XSDSTITCH Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
Your welcome!
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:iconxsdstitch:
XSDSTITCH Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
A Twin? Because you said a chapter earlier Hope is Cynders sister!

Fugeo: Interesting idea...

Me: Why I have the feeling I don't like your thought...
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:icondragonofdarkness1992:
DragonofDarkness1992 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hope: Yes we are twins.

Me: So now do Fugeo have two unger sisters. :D

Hope: I have a big brother?!? How does he lookes?
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:iconxsdstitch:
XSDSTITCH Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
Is right here... *Points at Fugeo*

Fugeo: *Wave his paw and smiles* Hi, I'm Fugeo!
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:icondragonofdarkness1992:
DragonofDarkness1992 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Hope: Hi big brother.
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:iconxsdstitch:
XSDSTITCH Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
Fugeo: Nice to meet you!

Me: Why I have a bad feeling?

Fugeo: Because you know two dragons now who could burn down your collection of Lexikas!

Me: I need a fire-proof safe...
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:icondragonofdarkness1992:
DragonofDarkness1992 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Me: lol, yes you do Hopes Darkfire blast (That explosion from the frist CH) are realy dangerous, I know of experience. Av

Hope: It was just becouse... It was fun. :D
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KumoriWind Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
Very curious story, there are a few errors though: you forgot to spell "two" right, and you forgot to put periods: (.) and queston marks (?) at the end of Spyro, Cynder and Hopes lines/sentances. other than that it's very nice.
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:icondragonofdarkness1992:
DragonofDarkness1992 Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Thanks for the comment. :D
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KumoriWind Featured By Owner Dec 15, 2008
Not a problem!
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